Outstanding compositions

Melissa Anne Lim

During the school holidays, Jasmine and Aiden had a lovely holiday. They were very happy to go to a countryside in Malaysia to visit their grandparents.
Jasmine and Aiden were mesmerised by the trees and plants around their grandparents' house. Their grandparents were very happy to see them. They were welcomed with opened arms. It was very quiet and peaceful until Jasmine and Aiden met the neighbours' children.
They were so noisy and playful. They played games and had a lot of fun and exercises. They spent many happy hours playing under the sun among the trees. Then, Jasmine and Aiden had to go back. At that time, they realised that they did not ask the children for their names. They hurried back and asked,"What are your names?" they asked. The children replied, "Our names are John and Vivian." They said, "Nice to meet you!"
Jasmine and Aiden had to go already. They were very sad and reluctant to go home and they had enjoyed their trip to their grandparents' house. They bade farewell to their grandparents. They told their friends in Singapore about their wonderful experiences.

Dawn Ang

During the school holidays, Paul and Candy had a lovely holiday with their grandparents. Their grandparents lived in a countryside in Malaysia. When Paul and Candy reached their destination, they were very happy.
Paul and Candy loved the quiet and peaceful environment. There were many different kinds of trees and plants around their grandparents' house. Paul and Candy were then welcomed with opened arms by their neighbours and friends.
Paul and Candy spent many happy hours playing games as well as having fun and exercises under the sun among the trees. They could not stop playing.
Paul and Candy were sad that the holidays were over. They were reluctant to go home. Their aunt came to drive them home. They told their aunt that they enjoyed themselves and they wanted to come again. They bade farewell to their grandparents and friends. They brought back wonderful memories of this countryside.

Marie Tara Kwok Premraj

Last week, Belinda and her brother, Benedict, had a lovely holiday. During the school holidays, they went to Malaysia. They were very excited and very happy to see their grandparents. Their grandparents lived in a countryside in Malaysia.
Belinda and Benedict loved the beautiful view surrounding their grandparents' house. The surroundings were quiet and peaceful with many trees and plants. The children were welcomed with opened arms by their grandparents.
Belinda and Benedict spent many happy hours playing games like hide-and-seek and hop-scotch. They lay down under the sun among the trees and had lots of fun and exercise each day.
The next day, it was time to go home. Belinda and Benedict were very sad and they were reluctant to go home. They bade farewell to their grandparents and promised to visit them again. They enjoyed their stay at their grandparents' house and had wonderful memories of this countryside.

Nicola Lim

Last year, Mary and her brother had a wonderful holiday. They were on cloud nine as they were going to a countryside in Malaysia to stay with their grandplarents.
When they reached their grandparents' house, their grandparents were very happy to see them. Many and her brother loved the quiet and peaceful sights and moments. They noticed that their grandparents' house was surrounded by many plants and trees. The neighbours welcomed them with opened arms. They introduced themselves politely.
Mary and her brother spent many happy hours playing different games such as blindman bluff, catching, hide-and-seek and many others. They had lots of fun and exercise. They played under the shady trees.
When the holidays were over, Mary and her brother were reluctant to go home as they had enjoyed themselves there. They felt down and sad when their parents told them that it was time to go home. They had wonderful memories and experiences at this countryside and they wished they could visit their grandparents again. They bade farewell to their grandparents. They were extremely exhausted but happy.