Young writers: Acelyn, Xin Ying, Wan Xuan and Xin Xin

These students had fared well for their recent composition. Their compositions are below, with red for good vocabulary/good phrases.

Zheng Xin Xin

One Sunday morning, Anna's parents decided to bring her to the amusement park. Anna felt so excited.
After reaching their destination, Anna's parents bought the tickets and there was a long queue. Anna went into the park. She bought some popcorn to eat.
After that, Anna went to ride on the carousel. She laughed heartily as the carousel turned round and round.
After playing for a long time, Anna realised that she was lost. She ran around the aprk trying to locate her parents but there was no luck. Anna was so terrified that she began crying.
A security officer saw Anna crying and asked her what had happened. Anna told him that she was lost. The security officer brought Anna to the information counter. There, Anna saw her parents. She ran towards them happily. Anna's parents were relieved after they saw Anna. They hugged her tightly and thanked the security officer gratefully. After that, Anna's father even bought a bottle of water for him. With the happy experience, they went home. Anna and her parents had an eventful day.

Chua Wan Xuan

Samantha was very happy as she was in an amusement park in Korea. Her mother and father had just paid for the tickets to go to a few game stalls and a carousel. Samantha said she wanted to go on the carousel first, so they went there.
Samantha was very excited as the carousel spun round and round, as fast as a spinning top. When Samantha came off the carousel, her mother and father were nowhere to be seen! Samantha was terrified and she cried for a long time.
Just then, there was an announcement,"There is a missing girl and if anyone has seen her, please kindly lead her to the information counter." When a stall-keeper saw Samantha, he though that she could be the missing girl so he brought her to the information counter.
Samantha's parents were relieved when they saw her. There were a lot of hugs and kisses being exchanged. Samantha's father wanted to reward the stall-keeper but the stall-keeper said he just could not take it. From that day onwards, Samantha's parents learnt to keep a proper eye on their daughter.

Acelyn Aw

"Yipee!" Stephanie gasped with excitement. She was on her way to the amusement park with her family. Not for long, they reached the venue. When they entered the place, Stephanie ran frantically to the pop-corn stall. It was very crowded on that day.

Stephanie was elated and could not wait to ride on the carousel. She waited patiently as the queue was very long. As stephanie rode on the carousel, she gave a boy a huge smile.

After a long time riding the carousel, Stephanie realised that she had lost her parents. She screamed and wailed loudly when a kind man walked towards her. He asked what had happened. Stephanie muttered as she rubbed her eyes. The man showed her his name tag and said he was a person working here. He brought her to the information counter.

A lady at the customer service counter made a clear announcement for Stephanie's parents to pick her up. Her parents ran to the counter immediately after the announcement. When Stephanie saw her parents, she ran towards them and hugged them. Tears of joy rolled down Stephanie's cheeks when she thanked the man for finding her parents. They waved goodbye to the man and went on playing the thrilling rides. Stephanie learnt a lesson-never be out of your parents' sight.

Lek Xin Ying

Last Saturday, Jamie and her parents went to the amusement park. Jamie was very excited. She could not wait to go there. when they reached there, it was noisy and crowded. There were games to play and ferris wheel to ride on. Jamie went to one of the stalls and bought a box of pop corn.

After eating, while her parents were looking at the food stalls, Jamie saw the carousel and wanted to ride on it. Without informing her parents, she ran and queued patiently. She was playing happily until she realised that her parents were missing.

After the ride, she searched and searched but her parents were nowhere to be seen. She was so terrified that she cried and cried. A passer-by comforted her and brought her to a policeman. The policeman then searched for Jamie's parents at the amusement park.

Jamie was happy to see her parents waiting for her. They hugged her tightly. She thanked the policeman and the passer-by. Jamie had learnt her lesson not to wander off on her own.